Writing

Tuesday 3rd November

"Isn't it beautiful?"

"It sure is"

"Too bad we'll never get there"

"Hey don't say that, we just have to keep trying"

"Oh give it up El,"

Okay, okay, okay, let's take it from the beginning. OK, so basically there's a bunch of animal friends, Elephant, Giraffe, Snakey, Wolf, Eagle, and a few more. But these animals have a dream, a dream of becoming animalnaughts! ( they want to go to the moon ). Anyway they've been trying to get to the moon for years and almost all the animals have given up hope. Can Elephant and Giraffe, help their friends regain hope and get to the moon? They sure hope they can!

"Wolf, check it out" Snake hissed.

" What?"

"It's El and Gir, with some sort of blue paper"

"Let's check it out"

In fact old Snakey was right, it was some blue paper with white writing, and some pictures." Oh hey guys," said Elephant, "we came with this blueprint for a rocket ship, but, we're going to need some help". So of they went.

"Ahhh!"

"Ruuuuuuuuuuun"

"Look out!!!!"

All the town miners were out, now for phase 2.

"Go go go!" whispered snake and off Elephant went barging into the mine. Elephant started hitting the iron with his trunk and pulled out piece's of it. Wolf, Eagle and Ostrich then pilled the iron on their back and ran/zoomed off to Snake, Penguin and Mouse. "Why am I helping with this again?" Wolf said to no one in particular. Snake over heard, "because, we're El and Gir's friends, and they want us to help, so we help."

"Oh". Meanwhile, working on phase 3, Giraffe and Spider we keeping the townsfolk and guards away from the mines. Giraffe by, scaring the villagers in their houses and afterwards, Spider would lock them in by spraying webs on doors to doors.

"That's all the iron"

"Sweet, let's get going" 

All four animals in the mine started running back to the others.

El stopped off in the village, "let's go, all done!" Then Spider jumped on Giraffe's back and he galloped away with Elephant right behind him.

Wednesday 18th February

Once upon a time there was a world... a world where everything was run by a evil team who called themselves, The Evil Eight, even though there's only three. They were the bosses, they were the rulers, they were the kings, and queen.

Back on planet Earth, a small family of four.... a dad, a mum, a 13 year old boy and a 9 year old girl.Even though they didn't know it yet, the fate of the world was in THEIR hands.Everything would change, once they got off the Gold Class seating in the Emirates plane and onto a beautiful holiday destination... The Gold Coast!

In the other evil world called Unneshah, the evil rulers were planning their biggest attack yet. Destroying planet earth.


The family or four, the Oaks, had just booked into their hotel, The La Menae, and settled into their room on the 8th floor, 2nd door on the left.


On Unneshah the kings and queen were getting ready to send out their troop to attack.Now in case you didn't know, the queen was called Salluse, one king was called Rikate and the other king was called Chritch.


The Oaks were just coming out of the lobby doors and ready to have a fun day a the beach when suddenly the sky turned dark purple and black and a hole opened up in the sky. Out of the hole came lots of silver men on flying silver.... motor bikes? They were throwing silver bombs that destroyed the ground and sent SILVER dust everywhere. People were screaming, babies were crying and more silver dust was exploding everywhere. The Oaks were confused and scared then say saw it, out of the big hole came a massive ship (like the ones in Star Wars) carrying three giants. "People of Earth" said the middle-sized one, who king of sounded like a girl " we are here to destroy your filthy planet you humans call home" they all started laughing.
" Oh forgive us" the same giant said " we forgot to introduce ourselves, how rude, I'm Queen Salluse and this one is my big brother King Rikate" she said pointing to here right, at the biggest one of all.
" And I'm Chritch, Prince Chritch to all of you" said the smaller one. " We have a offer" Rikate yelled " it's your decision, either we make you all immortal and make you our slaves for eternity or, we destroy your whole filthy plant, what do you choose?" he said with grin. A small family or three were trying to sneak away carefully when Chritch saw them out of the corner of his eye, pulled his hand up a long beam of light came out lighting fast and obliterated the poor family. The screams and cry's started again after hearing wand witnessing it. The giants just laughed. " you have 10 seconds to decide, what is it? eternal slaves, or Earth dead?" Salluse said.


"5... 4... 3... 2... AND....-"
"WAIT!" Mr Oak said. "Why pick here.... why do you fly to America or somewhere where there is more people?" he yelled.
The giants thought over this opinion then Rikate said " Very well, but YOU shall come with us" Rikate yelled, his finger pointing straight at Mr Oak. Chritch lurched forward and grabbed Mr Oak and his Wife - Mrs Oak - and together all five of them flew of. "NOOOO" the young boy named James Oak screamed. " MUMMY DADDY" pleaded Jessie Oak. With that the sky cleared up and looked as if almost nothing had happened. James and Jessie were devastated. For all they knew, they were orphans. Jessie just curled up into a ball and cried, but James, James was not just about to let those no-good, fat, ugly.... things take his parents away like that. He needed a plan of revenge, and he needed it fast.